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12-01-2009, 10:58 AM
Well, we are waking the kids up bright and early tomorrow morning to head to Disney World. They have absolutely no idea! :secret: I just wrote this poem and printed it on Christmas themed paper. I will have my DD7 read it for herself and then have her read it to my DS4 to tell him the surprise. Here it is....what do you think?.....:thumbsup: or :ack:

"Rise and shine to this MAGICAL DAY...
A Wonderful surprise is only seconds away.
Your wildest dreams will soon be here...
So pack your bags because fun is near.
Your Mom and Dad love you so....
And we know where you always ask to go.
The airplane is waiting, so hurry, get dressed ...
We’re visiting Mickey, Minnnie and all of the rest.
It’s Christmas in Disney World, and there’s snow on Main Street...
We’re leaving RIGHT NOW for this MAGICAL TREAT!!!!"

12-01-2009, 11:09 AM
LOVE IT!!!!! :thumbsup:

Ms. Mode
12-01-2009, 11:15 AM
This is great!

Have a happy trip :mickey:

12-01-2009, 11:16 AM
That's a great poem!! I bet your kids will be so excited!!!!!!:thumbsup:

Have a fun trip!:mickey:

Bass T-bone
12-01-2009, 11:18 AM
Nicely done...
"I will not cry, I will not cry..." :blush:

12-01-2009, 11:57 AM
Very Nice! :mickey:

PS have fun on your trip!

12-01-2009, 12:49 PM
Excellent job! Ah, to be a fly on the wall when DD "gets" it . . . how exciting for you all! Have a great time & be sure to let us know what a magical time you have!:mickey:

12-01-2009, 01:06 PM
Love the poem!! I can only imagine how excited your DD will be when she connects the dots!

Have a great time!!

Disney Doll
12-01-2009, 02:58 PM
Very cute! What a fun surprise. Hope you have a fabulous trip!!

12-01-2009, 03:24 PM
AWESOME!!!! :mickey:

12-01-2009, 03:57 PM
Nice poem. Have a great time.:mickey:

Tigger's Mom
12-01-2009, 09:19 PM
Great poem!! Have a wonderfully magical trip!!

12-01-2009, 11:31 PM
Wow! Your kids are going to be so excited. You are very creative. Great poem! Have a great trip.

12-02-2009, 03:35 AM
What a cool poem. Have a wonderful trip

12-02-2009, 10:37 AM
I hope your trip is as great as the poem...its a wonderful way to break the news! I loved it...wish I was that creative! Lucky kids! :thumbsup:

12-02-2009, 11:30 AM
I hope you get them on video as they realize where they are going! Makes for great memories!

12-02-2009, 03:46 PM

12-02-2009, 05:17 PM
That was adorable!:thumbsup: Let us know how it went.......

12-02-2009, 05:42 PM
I JUST got offline confirming airline reservations and passholder rate room for a surprise trip for my 6-year old daughter. We leave Dec 16th - two weeks from today. I even got awesome airfares non-stop from Dallas to Orlando for $149! I dont know if I can hold it for 2 weeks but after reading your post I'm going to try - GREAT idea for being a COMPLETE surprise - it's a dad/daughter trip while mom and baby sister stay home so she is going to be PUMPED getting to go with just Dad (no baby sister LOL) to Disneyworld at Christmas time! My wife thinks I'm a little crazy for such spur of the moment but she cant wait to see her reaction! Hope you guys have an AWESOME trip.

12-03-2009, 03:19 PM

Everybody have an AWESOME time!!!

12-03-2009, 03:27 PM
Nicely done...
"I will not cry, I will not cry..." :blush:
You're stronger than me, that did make me cry.
I love it. You guys have a great trip!!

12-03-2009, 07:31 PM
WOW! That's is awesome! :) :) :)

Have a GREAT trip! :mickey:

12-05-2009, 04:27 PM
I cried :blush: